Sunday, September 11, 2011

CNF; Growing is Forever.

The luminous light I cannot explain,
Such vibrant colors,
so opposite of plain,
They stand so tall, united together.
Hoping this boundryless land will be here forever.
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  1. Callie Ollie GailSeptember 12, 2011 at 5:50 AM

    This is absolutely wonderful. The dicription and rhyming is beautiful. The only line I would suggest to work on is "so opposite of plain" because we can already see it is by the line with vibrant colors, but again, it is beautiful.

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  2. kelss.September 12, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    I love the words you chose to describe what you saw.
    I agree with Callie with the line " so opposite of plain"
    It's strong but I think it can be more detailed!
    Overall it's great!

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